Many English learners believe that in order to speak and write in English properly, all they need is an extensive vocabulary and correct grammar: first they learn the words, then they use grammar to form sentences using those words. That’s it! Well, not exactly.
While these two aspects of the English language are essential, grammar and vocabulary alone are simply not enough to master the language.
Take, for example, the following response to a sample Part 1 question of the IELTS Speaking test:
Examiner: “Tell me about the kind of accommodation you live in.”
Candidate: “I live in an apartment. I really like my apartment. It’s modern. It’s conveniently located. The apartment is in the city center. It’s close to my school. It only takes me 10 minutes to walk to school. The apartment is a bit small. I’d like to find a bigger one in the future.”
Even though the candidate used correct grammar and vocabulary, while reading the response, you probably got a feeling that something was missing.
What’s missing is called ‘cohesion’.
What is cohesion and why is it important?
Cohesion is the “glue” the holds your ideas together and allows them to flow smoothly. Good cohesion means that what you’re saying or writing is organized, thus making it easier for your listeners or readers to understand.
Linking words or phrases, also known as linkers, are important features of cohesion that help you connect your ideas in a logical way. Examples of linkers include: because, and, but, so and many, many more.
Like grammar and vocabulary, cohesion and coherence (how much a text makes sense) are part of the assessment criteria for the Speaking and Writing sections of the IELTS. This means that for you to achieve a higher band on your IELTS, your response must be easy to follow and understand and should have appropriate use of cohesive features.
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A closer look at linkers
Linking words and phrases can be used to add ideas together, to contrast them, or to show reasons, results or examples.
Although cohesion is an important feature of both speaking and writing, the use of linkers differs between the two.
Speakers generally use simpler, and often informal, linking words and phrases.
Writers, on the other hand, tend to use a variety of cohesive features, including more formal linkers, to organize their information and ideas. This is especially true when writing longer pieces of writing such as the discursive essay in Writing Task 2.
To manage cohesion effectively, make sure you can determine what you want to do with your ideas (i.e. are you adding to an idea, contrasting ideas, giving an example, etc.) to be able to pick an appropriate linker to do the job. Also, keep in mind that over-using linkers can become confusing or annoying for your audience, so avoid using too many.
Now, thinking back to the candidate at the beginning of this post, you may still be wondering how they could’ve used linkers to give a more cohesive response. While there’s a number of different ways to achieve this, the following is an easy-to-follow response with a variety of linkers, which connect the speaker’s ideas effectively:
Examiner: “Tell me about the kind of accommodation you live in.”
Candidate: “I live in an apartment. I really like my apartment because it’s modern and is conveniently located in the city center. It’s also close to my school, so it only takes me 10 minutes to walk to school. However, the apartment is a bit small, which is why I’d like to find a bigger one in the future.”
Improving your cohesion
Just as with any skill, acquiring the ability to effectively use a range of cohesive devices requires study and practice. One of the best ways to understand linkers and how to use them is through reading and listening.
During your IELTS preparation period, you're likely to be exposed to a number of high-quality textbooks, articles, podcasts, videos, etc. Use these examples to note how linkers are used.
As you practice writing essays, review your writing and underline the linking words and phrases you used. If you’re not showing variety, think about how you could use different linkers to avoid repetition. You can also practice, review and reflect on your spoken use of cohesive features by using a voice recorder.
Some examples of linkers or linking words
1. Addition
These introduce additional information or ideas.
Examples: and, also, moreover, furthermore, in addition
Usage: "The city has a rich history. Moreover, it boasts a vibrant cultural scene."
2. Contrast
These highlight differences or introduce opposing ideas.
Examples: however, nevertheless, on the contrary, in contrast, conversely, despite, in spite of, whereas, although, while
Usage: "The weather was cold. However, we still enjoyed our trip."
3. Cause and Effect
These linking words indicate a cause-and-effect relationship between ideas.
Examples: because, since, as, due to, owing to, thanks to, for, therefore, consequently, thus
Usage: "She studied hard for the exam. As a result, she scored high marks."
4. Sequence
Organise ideas or events in a particular order.
Examples: first, next, then, after that, finally, lastly
Usage: "First, we visited the museum. Then, we went to the park."
5. Comparison
These show similarities between ideas.
Examples: similarly, likewise, in the same way, in comparison, by contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlike, different from, whereas
Usage: "The two cities are quite different. Similarly, their cultures are unique."
6. Emphasis
These linkers highlight the importance of a particular point.
Examples: particularly, especially, notably, importantly, specifically, in particular, it is worth noting, of significance, above all, most importantly
Usage: "The team's performance was excellent. Indeed, they exceeded all expectations."
7. Example-based linking words
These are used to provide examples, which help increase understanding and interest in sentences.
Examples: for example, for instance, such as, like, including, to illustrate, as an illustration, namely, in particular, specifically
Usage: "There are many ways to stay healthy. For example, regular exercise and a balanced diet are crucial."
8. Result
Result linkers establish a cause-and-effect relationship, showing the outcome of a previous statement.
Examples: therefore, consequently, as a result, thus, hence, so, accordingly, for this reason, that is why
Usage: "He didn't study for the test. Consequently, he failed."
9. Expressing an opinion
These help convey personal viewpoints and subjective judgments.
Examples: in my opinion, I believe, personally, from my perspective, according to me, it seems to me, I think, as far as I'm concerned, in my view
Usage: "In my opinion, online learning is a valuable resource."
10. Time
Time linkers assist in providing a sense of timing and chronology to help listeners understand the sequence of events.
Examples: firstly, secondly, next, then, afterwards, subsequently, meanwhile, simultaneously, eventually, finally
Usage: "Next, we will discuss the financial implications."
11. Pointing out the obvious
These connectors indicate something as obvious or self-evident.
Examples: clearly, obviously, naturally, it is evident that, it goes without saying that, undoubtedly, needless to say, it is apparent that, it is self-evident that, it is clear that
Usage: "Obviously, safety measures must be followed."
12. Generalising
Generalising linking words present statements that apply to a wider range of situations or contexts.
Examples: generally, typically, in general, on the whole, broadly speaking, universally, by and large, in most cases, as a rule, for the most part
Usage: "Generally, people prefer to travel during the summer."
13. Alternatives
These indicate different possibilities or choices.
Examples: alternatively, instead, or, otherwise, on the other hand, in contrast, conversely, as an alternative, in lieu of, rather than
Usage: "We could go hiking this weekend. Alternatively, we could visit a museum."
14. Conclusion
Conclusion linkers signal the end of a discussion or summarise key points, providing closure.
Examples: in conclusion, to sum up, ultimately, all in all, in summary, to conclude, lastly, finally, overall, in a nutshell
Usage: "In conclusion, the project was a success despite the challenges."
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